315 Points17:33 on 25 November 2024

Short Story Adrian, Former Child

Posted by Almaty Dave
I am taking part in a writing competition with the theme of "desert isolation". The story must take place in either Mexico or the US southwest and feature a passage of desert isolation. Beyond that, we are up to our own devices to make whatever story we like.

This is the story of a washed-up former child celebrity.

Comments

 6Administrator
06:02 on 26 November 2024
That was very cool. It was already amusing before the last part. I will read the other one too.

I found some typoes:
"Monster whimpered at the site of it."
and
"Marie would become infatuated with her."
 0Almaty Dave (AlmatyDave)
09:23 on 26 November 2024
Good looking out! Thanks for catching the typoes!
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